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Between Trickles In your head
  you scream
Letting out
  the insanities within.

Then you tightened your grip
  holding on
To the last piece
  of your broken self.

Shout
  to the deepest
Caverns of Hell
  descend upon your own.

Drops of blood
  trickle between your legs
Life now lost
  the unborn sacrificed to death.
Two Sides of a Coin Love
A sword piercing through the heart.

Pain
A silent delight of dread and misery.

Nightly the cold comes
Piercing the heart
Burning the soul
Falling through the depths
Of Hell and all.

Taking the body
Consuming the mind
Reaping the entrails
and organs galore
Of this tired shell in kind.

We submit
We then give
And then we fail
Beginning our suffering anew.
Repeating the mistakes before.

Life
A game we play which we always lose.

Death
A coward's way of ending things.

We try to perceive
And then comprehend.
Life dealt its cards
We must play through
Or accept the facts we abhore.

Her crescent descends
Leaving us bit

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Takbo sa Riles

by ~ramendoza

Mga kaibigan,
Kababayan
Kapamilya't kapuso't
Mga hangal!
May isang pong bangkay
Natagpuan
Sa may riles ng tren banda kung saan
Maraming kumakain.

Dumating ang mga pulis.
Dumating na rin ang hepe,
Na siya namang bagong salsal,
Nagsuka't di nakayanan
Gutay-gutay na katawan
Sa may riles ng tren banda kung saan
Maraming kumakain.

Tinanong ng hepe
"Sinong may sala, sinong may gawa?"
Aksidente po ang nangyari!
Ngunit hindi sumang-ayon
Ang hepeng bagong salsal.
Si Boy RIles - dakpin si Boy Riles!

Anong katibayan
Tanong ng nagmamasid na bayan.
"Dahil ang bangkay ay natagpuan sa riles -
Kaya ang mananagot ay si Boy Riles!"
Sagot ng ating magiting na hepe.

Kaya tong si Riles
Nanakbo't nagtago
Sa kasalanang di ginawa,
Sa hepeng bagong salsal
At sa kahirapan
Ng paninirahan sa tabi ng riles
Kung saan banda maraming kumakain.
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Tagalog poem. Inspired by a joke from my friend which in turn, is a little bit true with the police force here in the Philippines (not generally all, but some of them). Lack of investigation and all that.
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~sevtech Apr 3, 2007
very nice...
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~ramendoza Apr 4, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
maraming salamat!

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~hildegarde Mar 31, 2007
aba, okay ha. ang katotohanan nga naman..tsk. maraming tlgang mga pangyayaring ganyan...nakakaawa...

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~cxes Mar 30, 2007
Kakatuwa :D

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It doesn’t make it better that you’re gone
It doesn’t ease the pain at all
That you’re gone.

- Gone, Urbandub.
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~ramendoza Mar 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe. thenks

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~Celestial4ever Mar 30, 2007  Professional Filmographer
Sounds interesting :) Would it be okay if you could post up the English translation?

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~ramendoza Mar 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll try to translate though I cannot say that the emotion would be retained. I'll try my best though. :D

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~Celestial4ever Mar 31, 2007  Professional Filmographer
:D

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The Knife Brutus Held Now I know how Ceasar felt
Stabbed by the knife Brutus held
You were treated as a friend - a brother
And you really returned the favor

Your timely death will come along
Trust me, it wont be that long

I can't keep up with all the dread
Emotions filled with anger and hatred
Never bank on what they say is true
Empty words unleashing hell upon you

Your timely death will come along
Trust me, it wont be that long

You are the perfect enemy
Masked as a friendly entity
You use friendship as your shield
Tongue as your weapon, now I bleed

Your timely death will come along
Trust me, it wont be that long

Theres no use in thinking
While The Knife Brutus Held by ~ramendoza
Two Sides of a Coin Love
A sword piercing through the heart.

Pain
A silent delight of dread and misery.

Nightly the cold comes
Piercing the heart
Burning the soul
Falling through the depths
Of Hell and all.

Taking the body
Consuming the mind
Reaping the entrails
and organs galore
Of this tired shell in kind.

We submit
We then give
And then we fail
Beginning our suffering anew.
Repeating the mistakes before.

Life
A game we play which we always lose.

Death
A coward's way of ending things.

We try to perceive
And then comprehend.
Life dealt its cards
We must play through
Or accept the facts we abhore.

Her crescent descends
Leaving us bitTwo Sides of a Coin by ~ramendoza
Between Trickles In your head
  you scream
Letting out
  the insanities within.

Then you tightened your grip
  holding on
To the last piece
  of your broken self.

Shout
  to the deepest
Caverns of Hell
  descend upon your own.

Drops of blood
  trickle between your legs
Life now lost
  the unborn sacrificed to death.Between Trickles by ~ramendoza
The Trial Walk away now
For you are no longer needed!
We are the new necessity
The new pantheon-

          You are but false gods
          Pretentions and lies covering the truth!
          You mask yourselves with hope
          But enslave those who believe.

For they are the birth-giver!
Called us forth,
They needed us
And enslaved themselves before us!

          And yet you continue
          To let them be of such-

Look who is talking
You call yourself the All-Father
But you heeded them to sacrifice
You taught them to butcher!
You taught them to kill!
You taught them their undoing!

         For it is the necessity!
   The Trial by ~ramendoza
Falling Its past two and I can't stop thinking
Of your face and your lips smiling.
Here I am, now writing
At the same time, hopefully wishing.

I remember the moments earlier
And it just makes me so eager.

I wished the train would stop
And fill the little distance, our heart's gap.

I dream of your embrace
A sweet drug I long to taste.

I think of the texture of your hand
A feeling of something grand.

And to be frank, I dream of your kiss
Oh! It would be such of celestial bliss!

I take the leap within the heart
And try to convey it in this art.

Hear this heart beating
Feel this soul burning
Now I have to tell you something
For you, I Falling by ~ramendoza
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